Second Draft Double Page Spread

First Double Page Draft

Final Contents Page

Feed back changes in progress.

Teacher feedback

Strengths - Well laid out and and simple with bold headings and bold writing that stands out from the background.

Improvements -


Strengths

• You can tell you have looked at conventions of music magazines as you have used pretty much all of them. 
• You have used a puff which makes the page look individual and you have tried to be unique. 
• The image has had alot of thought in relation to the genre. 

Improvement

• I'm not sure whether it is the style you are going for but the contents page actually looks scary and I'm not sure if that will just be my opinion... it will appeal to a particular audience.
• The green at the top of the page doesn't really go with the colour scheme.  

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Third Contents Page