Positive: Lots of colour and also very detailed.
Improvements: Add more cover lines.
Positive: Masthead is detailed.
Improvements: Too busy.
Positive: Great font.
Improvements: Quite a lot going on.
I am happy about the positive comments, although two of the 'room for improvement' comments I don't agree with. The ones which comment about the amount of items on the magazine, saying that it is too busy and that there is a lot going on. I disagree with these constructive comments, due to the idea of the Kerrang! and Rock Sound magazines follow the same busy styles. Not only that, but the placement of the items and the hectic front covers also fit the music genres style, which will be featuring in the magazine. For example; the screamo genre of music is fast paced, and heavy - giving off the rushed effect. This being shown by the style of my front cover.
As for the cover lines comments, I agree with this one completely. The magazine does need a few on the front to show the audience what will be featuring inside, and what they're going to be reading once they have bought the magazine.
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