Peer Assessment

Name of person: Kristina Lamb 

The blog is great! Full of detail you’ve included a lot of great points and really put a lot of effort in your work and front covers. You’ve made some unique points which stand out compared to other blogs which is a good thing.

Strengths of front cover:

 - The masthead is great and stands out. Its clearly designed, which shows you've put consideration into and very creative. 

-The image and layout is good and follows conventional layouts.

Improvements:

- You may want to include some more magazine features like adding a date and story lines.
- May want to add text under images as the audience may not be quite sure who they are.
- At the bottom you may even have enough room for a banner as you have a blank space that could be filled.
- The main article photo has no feature artist with it and the audience have no idea what the article about the celebrity is going to be about.