- Great design, great images, and great effects!
- Paint designs are really effective on this and draws your eye to the magazine straight away.
- The pull is in a good position as it is again eye catching!
- ADD SOME COVERLINES ! We need stories!
- Possibly add something to the bottom of the page such as a small banner? looks a tinyyyy bit bland.
- There is ALOT of colour! and it's looking very very busy. Maybe by making things a mix of greyscale and colour will reduce this a bit.
- Maybe use one picture in the left third instead of 2.
Monday, 7 January 2013
Peer Feedback - Lauren Mabbett
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